Lost

Posted by Hina

Few worlds within me crammed
some thoughts in veins are jammed
the crimson tide does chart
the lunar surface of my heart

For heaviness lies heavy
in places from comprehension privy
the sailing of breath is cankered
the vessel within has anchored

Is drowned the he who risks
face-first the depths of abyss?
clutching the sinks of the fall
for him no more the bell will toll?

Forgetting oneself in gloom
for hope yet have no room
that in fact might lose
the being within the hat and shoes

3 comments:

  1. Suree

    good one...

    urs
    suree

  1. Hina

    thanks suree..

  1. Niyaa

    Is drowned the he who risks
    face-first the depths of abyss?

    i loved these lines..

    fanstastic job though i must confess didn't get a few lines... bt ur poems sound so nice cz of the inimitable rhymes that one cant help but like them all!

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