Elbow Room

4 comments:

1. 
   Kavya Sharma
   
   January 31, 2009 at 11:00 AM

   the words in hindi flow as effortlessly from u as they do in english..

1. 
   Hina
   
   February 1, 2009 at 1:01 AM

   You know i feel Hindi has more depth of expression than English..this one was a novice's attempt...written wayyy back in school days...when teenage blues and bemusement took a toll!It aint much.a very simple no-nonsense poem.i remember jotting it down with a feeling of..."what-the-heck!"

1. 
   Niyaa
   
   March 1, 2009 at 3:46 AM

   this poem.. that i wrongly thought of to have been mine! im so sorry! but u see, that shows how attached i must have felt to it so as to steal it from its rightful owner..under her very eye! ;) hindi rocks!

1. 
   Ritesh Wakode
   
   January 5, 2010 at 3:58 AM

   jo mila nahi
   use kya dhondhna
   jo hain karib usi me se chunana
   yahi to rasta jidgika apnana
   hamara bhi aur shayad tumharabhi
   
   kabhi apekshame hame na bhulana
   aphike pass aur aap hi ke karib
   yehi hain jindagi yehi hain rasata
   hamarabhi aur shayad tumharabhi
   
   jo aapme hain use bahar maat dhodhna
   Ritesh naam hain hamara
   IT ki is duniyame hame email jarur karana
   yehi hain style hamara aur shayad tumharabhi
   
   
   
   
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